I can see palm trees on the sandy beach, blowing in the wind as the waves in the sea come crashing down. People playing drums and having a midnight party infront of a fire. People gathering around and singing their favourite songs. And people enjoying their life's in general.
Nice descriptions, Alazae. I like how you chose to describe the relaxing sounds in the Calypso. I challenge you now to include an introduction to your posts. You are getting the hang of blogging now, so I want to see you take your work to the next level.
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Hi Alazae it's Jack I like your blog as you've described what you think it is with detail so its really clear what you think.
ReplyDeleteHey Alazae, I think your blog is really good! I like how made the picture and music sound like a happy, fun night.
ReplyDeleteHey Alazae, I really like how you made the picture and the music sound like a real fun night.
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